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Post by Planetslick on Jul 5, 2006 20:56:25 GMT -5
hey everyone its 2:55am i can't sleep really board out of nowhere i just wrote this give me your opinions thanks
Sadistic Perfection
Your head swinging from side to side hanging by a rope adorning your neck I find myself grinning at the sight of you taking pleasure in watching you die
Pale as porcelain, your face as white as a ghost bloodshot eyes looking straight at me A smirk creeping to my features directed your way I let the gentle breeze sway you back and forth
Your blood slowly dripping down your arm I catch it letting it linger in my hands intoxicated by it's scent, it slowly drops on the ground falling into a pool of red beneath your feet
Leaves slowly descend on your heavenly tiara I chant to the wind to blow away the imperfection my prayers, answered by the gentle whisper as leaves fall to the ground and leave your hair untouched
Sighing, I look up at you and give you one last glance such beauty only achieved in death with a smile, I bid you my last farewell and let time take its toll on your perfection....
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Post by Michael on Jul 7, 2006 12:28:27 GMT -5
Ew, that kind of creep but it was awesome! Great job on writing it. I loved everything about it... especially this part:
"Leaves slowly descend on your heavenly tiara I chant to the wind to blow away the imperfection my prayers, answered by the gentle whisper as leaves fall to the ground and leave your hair untouched"
Beautiful.
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