A couple poems I wrote and people want to publish.

[Ifrit]

Rebel

They pull their guns,
And aim for their fears.
They took away innocent lives,
Those that have been here for years.

Howls and morns sing through the plains.
Many others killed back in the day.

Too much superstition,
No one bothers to find the truth.
We see wolves as human killers,
Wolves see humans as natures betrayers.


Painful Memories

Everyday is a torment,
As I look back at the awful moment.
Trying to force it to leave my head,
Sometimes I wish i were the one dead.

I try to look past from what I now see,
But for I know it will never again be.

All the pain you left behind,
Will no longer be able to be felt inside.

Crazy thoughts run my mind,
And i still cannot bind what you have left behind.

This is all because you had to leave,
And yet after all these years it's still hard to believe.

I don't think they should be I don't think they are that good... so what do others think?

[squidie]

I hope you do well with your poetry on the future. That is a good piece of work I just read.

[Ifrit]

awww.. thanks *hugs* lol

[matthew]

I don't know much about poetry, to be honest, but you have a talent for it. They seem to be pretty good to me